Gosh, why would anyone write such a depressing poem! I am kidding.
On a more truthful note, this poem feels like when I let out my breath after something hard is over and when I take it back in I swear that it is worth more than it used to be. Awesome how you said such a wonderful thing in such a short and to the point poem. Your poems are good from what I have heard.
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This makes me smile, Josh.
I like those flowers. and the poem. and the thoughts behind it.
Josh Barber, you are a good man, and a much better wordsmith than I
Gosh, why would anyone write such a depressing poem! I am kidding.
On a more truthful note, this poem feels like when I let out my breath after something hard is over and when I take it back in I swear that it is worth more than it used to be. Awesome how you said such a wonderful thing in such a short and to the point poem. Your poems are good from what I have heard.
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